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Chủ đề 1.
Think of A poem
-I ask the soil, 'How do the soil live together?'
We raise each other.
-I ask the water, 'How do the water live together?'.
We fill each other.
-I ask the grass, 'How do the grass live together?'
We fasten each other to make horizones.
-I ask the human beings, 'How do the people live together?'
-I ask the human beings, 'How do the people live together?'
-I ask the human beings, 'How do the people live together?'

Excuse me,I don't really understand.
G+3Tic=C,what is this?

(thanks much for your outline)

G+3Tic=C tức nghĩa là như sau:
General statement + 3(Transition + illustration + Conclusion) = Conclusion.
cụ thể hơn:
Paragraph1: General statement
Paragraph 2, 3, 4: 3Tic
Paragraph 5: Conclusion.

Kiểu này giống với lạoi bài: Tổng phân hợp trong TV mình đó bạn.

how interesting! It will be very useful for me if you can give me some experience in doing this kind of essay,such as how to build symtems of points quickly,how to control the limitted time,linkink words,normal mistakes...
Pleased to meet you at this room.
p/s:lam sao em go duoc tieng viet co dau?

What is your motivation to writing this kind of essay? I just want to help those who are serious.
Anyway, the best way to be good at writing is to practice, practice and practice. If u want to improve why don't you begin with the topic over there?

P/s: có 1 thanh nhỏ xuất hiện trên trang forum đó, bao gồm gõ tắt, VNI,Telex, chính tả, bỏ dấu kiểu mới,... chonj kiểu mình muốn là gõ TV được thôi mà.

Topic mới (thuộc dạng independent toefl essay)
Should teenagers work while they are students?

Sau đây là bài viết của tôi ( chua edit, nên có thể có một vài lỗi, mong mọi người thông cảm)
Should teenagers work while they are students?
Essay:
Nowadays, many teenagers choose to work while they are students, however others have opposite opinions. As far as I am concerned, I believe that the idea teenagers work even though they are just students is really good.
Firstly, working will provide students more experiences. We all know that, the distance between the knowledge we adopt in school and in real life is quite far. Working while we are students can teach us many lessons that we can’t get in school such as teamwork ability, communicating skills etc. With these lessons, we not only can achieve more success in studying but also in social life.
Furthermore, working while we are students helps broaden our horizon. We can meet many kinds of people, make more friends. That way, we will feel excited in working and understand the meaning of life outside the fence of school.
Another reason need to take into account is working helps us earn some extra money. There fore, we can adopt some materials that are necessary for studying. More importantly, we will understand the meaning of money our parents providing us. What is more wonderful than we can earn our money by ourselves and become more independent?
Although some may argue that working while we are students can affect our studying in class, reduce our grade in examinations or very time-consuming, I believe that working part-time job is more helpful than harmful. Based on above discussion, I think that as teenagers, we should take part-time job while we are students.